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Wow, that is terrible. Someone told him to get the name Torrance in there, that's for sure. At least he's certified.
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This one sounds like it's from the same person.
click here
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Quote: Originally posted by Richard MooreQuote: Originally posted by hausdok
If you've ever heard how the internet is dumbing down America, but weren't sure what it all meant, check out the linked press release. It's obviously written by a home inspector... I doubt that. It just doesn't match the site at equityinspections.com. I can't quite figure out what PR-USA is, but my money is on the piece being written by someone on the Indian subcontinent to promote or, more likely, practice their English writing skills. We've had some of those here.
"As utility cost rise everyone is looking for was to save on their energy bills. The internet, the daily paper and magazines all have tips for reducing your energy usage and expenses. These little bits of energy saving insight are great advice, but are no substitute for a professional energy audit".
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Quote: Originally posted by hoosier inspectorThis one sounds like it's from the same person. click here
Ah! See, there you go, India. It must be some sort of language class exercise. I tried to e-mail Michael Boeger from his site, as I thought he might be amused, but his contact e-mail page seems to be totally screwed up. I got a thank you page from some company in England. Odd!
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"As utility costs rise everyone is looking for ways to save on their energy bills."
Bill, that's just a couple of typos. Hardly the same thing as the gobbleygook Mike linked to.
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You guys actually read that? My head hurt after the first sentence. In addition to hiring a writer I'd add a web designer to the list, the page asthetic as as bad as the text.
Mike, you might want to rethink the elementary school as a writing resource. You wouldn't believe some of the written material that comes from my son's school. It doesn't matter if it's the principal, the super, the teachers or the PTA. It's a wonder these kids can read and write at all when you see the faculty's proficiency.
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They really like the word Torrance, counted 20 of them before I blanked out.
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SEO attempt, here's the provider:
http://www.articlesnatch.com/
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Darn, I missed it the post has been removed. I though it may have been my cuz vern from Piney Woods, Mississippi. We people from MS right really well!!!!!!Hey I am from MS so don't get madd....
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