Trent Tarter Posted November 4, 2017 Report Share Posted November 4, 2017 I finally broke down and had a professional website made. This is the first rollout, I plan on getting some better photos and making a few changes over the next few months. Here it is https://bluevalleyhomeinspection.com/ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marc Posted November 4, 2017 Report Share Posted November 4, 2017 As soon as the page downloads, just about everything a prospective client needs is right there. Beautifully done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jim Katen Posted November 4, 2017 Report Share Posted November 4, 2017 It looks good. I like it. Two suggestions: At the bottom of the Home page, under the heading, "An Interactive Create Request List," the penultimate sentence reads, "Simply use the CRL™ to create your repair addendum along with your real estate agent." Alert readers will chuckle at the error. I suggest simply dropping the "along with your agent" part. It's not necessary. Near the top of the Services page, the rascal who wrote the copy must have re-used the same paragraph from another website because he refers to you as "Trust Inspection Services." In addition to correcting the error, you might want to do some searches to see how much of the copy on your site is re-used from other sites that HomeGauge already designed. You want the copy on your pages to be unique. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trent Tarter Posted November 4, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2017 6 hours ago, Marc said: As soon as the page downloads, just about everything a prospective client needs is right there. Beautifully done. Thanks Marc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trent Tarter Posted November 4, 2017 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2017 1 hour ago, Jim Katen said: It looks good. I like it. Two suggestions: At the bottom of the Home page, under the heading, "An Interactive Create Request List," the penultimate sentence reads, "Simply use the CRL™ to create your repair addendum along with your real estate agent." Alert readers will chuckle at the error. I suggest simply dropping the "along with your agent" part. It's not necessary. Near the top of the Services page, the rascal who wrote the copy must have re-used the same paragraph from another website because he refers to you as "Trust Inspection Services." In addition to correcting the error, you might want to do some searches to see how much of the copy on your site is re-used from other sites that HomeGauge already designed. You want the copy on your pages to be unique. Thanks for the advise Jim, I found the "Trust Inspection Services" typo. I will call to get it fixed on Monday. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimK Posted October 14, 2018 Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 (edited) Good looking site. Best luck! Edited October 14, 2018 by TimK Looking for way to insert signature Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TimK Posted October 14, 2018 Report Share Posted October 14, 2018 I see your Oregon CCB number, but not your OCHI number. I assume it's an oversight since you probably know that it's required in any published format? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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