Hi John, I'm fairly new at this game and I don't have as much experience writing reports as some of the others. I started reading yours and reading the comments in the hopes of improving my own. A few things did catch my eye, I'll comment on some. Here goes... 1. When reading your report and finding items "of interest", I had to keep scrolling to the top of the page to see where I was. I would prefer to either have the lines be marked "3.10" to denote page 3, line 10, or 54 (should that be the line), to denote the 54th line of the report. 2. At 3.06 (page 3, line 06), you have occupied/time... why are these together? I would prefer to see; 3.06 - Inspection start time - 9:00 a.m. 3.07 - Inspection completion time - 11:45 a.m. 3.08 - Building status - Occupied 3. At 4.07 - Structural walls - concrete/block, Were they? Or are you referring to the foundation walls? At 4.04, you state they are wood frame. 4. At 4.09, although I agree that windows provide ventilation, so do other things too. I feel that windows deserve a "section" by themselves. To be continued...