Who is it? No credentials, no picture of you, no Fabry CV. You're telling me more about the NY State Thruway, horse racing, and restaurants than you do about yourself. Get a pic of you in front of a class, in your cool building. Mentally put people into the space. Also, sales pitch your building....tell folks how cool it is to be in it, let alone taking classes in it. Passive voice is not appropriate; talk to your students..... as in.... "The curriculum is designed to be interactive and participatory. an immersive approach to ensure all questions are answered. I want you to be engaged and actively participate so that all of your questions are answered." Or something like that.