I would not use the word cladding when describing the siding. Just call it siding. You say to have a deck specialist fix the railing, but a carpenter address the deck/flashing problem. The Water Heater section is kind of disjointed and hard to follow. The last sentence of a paragraph just says the water heater is in poor condition. I would suggest bolding or somehow identifying defects in the report to make it easier on the reader. Later you say the water heater is leaking, but the picture is of the relief valve. Which one is leaking. What is this supposed to mean: "When reference is made to the type of plumbing, the comment relies on a visual observation, seller statements, the presence or absence of a water bond, and what may be present in the way of notification in the electrical service panel. There is no non-invasive way to determine what is behind a closed wall. For example, when copper plumbing is identified, copper piping protrudes from the walls behind plumbing fixtures. If client requires absolute knowledge as to the type of plumbing throughout the home, then a consultation with a licensed plumbing contractor is recommended. " In the entire plumbing section you don't tell us if the water pressure/flow or drainage is OK. Maybe it's in the bathroom section, I don't know. You don't inspect the forced air heating system in the summer when the air conditioning is in use? Why not?