kurt Posted July 3, 2012 Report Posted July 3, 2012 I think the core idea here is very interesting. The bridge abutment/steel/street part works, the moon works, not sure about the lined bluish background. Very cool, though.
Mike Lamb Posted July 3, 2012 Author Report Posted July 3, 2012 Thanks. Your comments are always appreciated.
Marc Posted July 4, 2012 Report Posted July 4, 2012 I'm no artist but would a view of the stars in a dark sky work better than the streaked background? Dancing and a star-studded sky go together. Marc
kurt Posted July 4, 2012 Report Posted July 4, 2012 I think there are compositional and thoughtful ideas going on, but it needs some other angle. Not so sure you have to whack out the colors; dancers engaged under a viaduct makes me look and think. Jack Vetrriano, while entirely dismissed by the cognoscenti, has broad appeal with a (sort of) similar approach; changing contextual perceptions deserves some additional thought.
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