I kinda looked it over, but did not have the discipline to read it. Forget about the format of report, repetition, poor grammar, etc. Did the inspector meet the expectations of his client? Likely no he/she did not.
Some of the comments are not understood by me, a home inspector, so how can a client understand it?
I remain in the school of short and sweet for reporting. Do not explain the defect, just report it. Lightening can strike anywhere. the nonsense about client personal protection is crap; you can trip and fall anywhere and die!
Find it and report it. Have the confidence in your own ability and knowledge to make "pronouncements". The electrical system is unsafe, bad, crap, etc. Get an electrician to fix it. No I did not spend all day making a list of the defects. No, I will not tell you how to re-wire the subpanel.
I have problems with inspectors that think they are saving the world one client at a time.