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If you are ready to take the first entrance exam, click on the button below. (Before you take such a momentous step, however, we encourage you to look at a sample exam, to get a feel for the kinds of questions you will be asked.) my bold

Ultimately one for Bonnie as I don't profess to be an expert, but that seems very awkward and with some "off" punctuation.

Shouldn't it read..."However, before you take such a momentous step, we encourage you to look at a sample exam to get a feel for the kinds of questions you will be asked."...?

That's as far as I got.

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